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Ahri ~ by IronCollapse Ahri ~ by IronCollapse
Hey guys ! So yeah this is kind of my first portrait ever
Also my first time drawing without using a lineart from start to finish
And by the way, this is for the The Spirit of Anime contest :)
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NightwatchGallery Featured By Owner Sep 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good Job dude, I would make the chin a bit bigger though and her left eye is a bit small compared to the right one. The Rendering is really good :)
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IronCollapse Featured By Owner Oct 3, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks man, and yeah I definetly still have a lot to practise proportion-wise :)
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AVLead Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
GJ plutôt x)

*sort tout juste de Red Orchestra 2*
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AVLead Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014
Ses lèvres >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

GG Clap 
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IronCollapse Featured By Owner Jul 28, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks o/
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PoorUnfortunateArt Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
She's very pretty :)
Her neck seems a bit too long to me though and her collarbone is in an odd angle. Her shoulders look a bit uneven too. The hair looks nice, but could have more life. Maybe add a few loose strands next time?
You have a good grasp on colouring! Her face looks great, I especially like how you did the lips :)
Keep it up!
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IronCollapse Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, now that you pointed it out I see it all ewe
I'll make sure to keep all of this in mind for the next portraits, and thank you so much for the compliments >w<
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PoorUnfortunateArt Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014
No problem :) I'm glad that I could help you!
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AnaPunda Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Nice job, keep up the good work :)
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IronCollapse Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, I will :D
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Mister-23 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014   Digital Artist
Quite the nice job you've done with the transition of colors here.
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IronCollapse Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you >w<
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Mister-23 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014   Digital Artist
Welcome you are.
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PixelKhaos Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014  Professional Interface Designer
I'd say I'm much to thank for that, haha.

But hey, Iron, I see my tips and suggestions did quite the good job for ya! No more jagged black outlines and good use of colour!
The ears are a bit odd still though, could be much due to the white-ish lines and dark outlines. Hair looks decent but can be improved, I can find you some great articles on how to get hair to flow realistically.
And lastly the right (my right) eye looks a bit blurry/blotchy and could be sharper.

All in all, great improvement!
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IronCollapse Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Hey, thank you very much for the feedback !
You are indeed the one to thank >w< It would look nothing like that if it wasn't for you.
And yeah that'd be nice for the hair :)
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Mister-23 Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2014   Digital Artist
I'd certainly agree.
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